The Mountain of Clear Eyes

Come closer, children of the hearth. Move nearer to the fire, for this is not a story that should be heard from far away. Some stories are like distant drums—you can hear them without understanding them. But others are like medicine. To benefit from them, you must sit close enough to smell them. This is one of those stories. The elders say, "A person who refuses advice at the valley often receives it on the mountain." Listen carefully.

Long ago, in a village resting between green hills and golden plains, where acacia trees danced with the wind and rivers carried the songs of children, there lived many young men and women. The village was prosperous. The harvests were good. The cattle were healthy. The evenings were filled with laughter. Yet beneath the beauty of the village, a sickness had quietly begun growing.

Not a sickness of the body. Not a sickness that caused coughing or fever. But a sickness of the heart. The elders say, "Some diseases enter through the eyes before they reach the heart." The young men no longer desired the unmarried girls of their age. The young women no longer dreamed of building futures with the unmarried young men around them.

Instead, they looked elsewhere. They looked toward married men. They looked toward married women. They desired what already belonged to another household. They chased what already sat beside another person's fire. At first it seemed harmless. Just conversations. Just secret smiles. Just meetings by the river. Just messages carried by friends. Just stolen moments beneath trees. But small fires become large fires. And hidden roots eventually crack stone. The elders say, "What begins as a spark rarely asks permission before becoming a flame."

Soon whispers traveled through the village. A married man spent too much time near the market. A young woman was often seen near another person's husband. A married woman received gifts from a young man who should have been seeking his own wife. Promises were exchanged. Hearts became entangled. And tears began appearing where laughter once lived.

The village priest watched everything. He was not merely a priest. He was an elder. A counselor. A shepherd of troubled hearts. His voice was calm. His eyes were patient. When angry people spoke to him, they often left peaceful. When confused people visited him, they often left thinking clearly. The elders say, "Wisdom does not shout because it knows truth can travel quietly." For many months he observed. He prayed. He listened. He advised. Yet the problem continued growing.

One evening, while watching the sun disappear behind Mt. Longonot, an idea entered his heart. The next Sunday, after prayers ended and the people began leaving, he stood and called the youth to remain behind. Curiosity filled the church. The young people gathered around him. Then he spoke. "My children," he said gently, "many of you are walking toward sorrow without knowing it." The room became quiet. "You chase what belongs to another person." "You borrow what was never yours." "You spend your future investing in someone else's present." Some lowered their eyes. Others shifted uncomfortably. A few looked away.

Then the priest smiled. "Next Saturday," he said, "we shall climb Mt. Longonot together." Immediately excitement spread. Some had never climbed the mountain. Others had only admired it from a distance. The priest nodded. "There are lessons that can only be learned from high places." The elders say, "A person standing on a mountain sees roads invisible from the valley."

Saturday arrived. Before sunrise, the group gathered. The air was cold. Mist hung above the ground. Birds were only beginning their morning songs. The priest carried water, bread, and fruit. The young people carried excitement. And together they began climbing. At first the journey was easy. The path was gentle. People laughed. They teased one another. Stories flowed. But soon the mountain began testing them. The slopes grew steeper. The sun climbed higher. Breathing became harder. The laughter grew quieter. The elders say, "A mountain teaches seriousness to those who begin climbing carelessly."

Step by step they continued. Some wanted to stop. Some complained. Others encouraged their friends. Meanwhile the priest moved steadily ahead. Not fast. Not slow. Simply steady. Like wisdom itself. Hours later they reached the summit. And there the world opened beneath them. The village looked tiny. The roads looked like thin threads. The forests resembled green blankets. The rivers shimmered like silver snakes winding through the earth. The young people stood silently. For the first time in many years, many of them saw their entire world from above. The elders say, "Height often reveals what closeness hides."

The priest allowed them time to rest. They drank water. They ate. They laughed. They took in the beauty around them. They took photos. Then he stood. And when he spoke, even the wind seemed to pause. "My children," he said, "look at the village below." They obeyed. "What do you see?" "Homes," one answered. "Families," said another. "Our future," added a third. The priest nodded. Then he asked another question. "When you secretly love a married man, where does he return at night?" No one answered. "To his wife," someone finally whispered. The priest nodded. "When you secretly love a married woman, where does she return?" "To her husband." Again he nodded.

Then his voice became firmer. "You give your heart." "They return home." "You carry the longing." "They continue living." "You lose sleep." "They continue building their future." The silence deepened. The mountain listened. The elders say, "Truth becomes loudest when no one wishes to hear it." The priest continued. "Tell me, have you ever heard a married man complain that a young woman wasted his future?" No one answered. "Have you ever heard a married woman complain that a young man stole her tomorrow?" No one answered. The priest pointed toward the village. "But I have heard many young people crying because they invested years in a future that never belonged to them." The words landed heavily. Like stones dropped into deep water. One young woman lowered her head. A young man stared at the ground. Others looked toward distant horizons.

The priest spoke softly now. "You are giving your youth away." "You are carrying burdens that belong to other people." "You are building castles on borrowed land." The elders say, "The house built upon another person's foundation never truly belongs to you." For a long time nobody spoke. Only the wind moved. Only the grass whispered. And for perhaps the first time, many of the young people saw their choices clearly. Not through excitement. Not through desire. But through wisdom.

Then the priest spoke one final time. "Your tomorrow belongs to you." "Do not hand it away." "Your future deserves your energy." "Your future deserves your loyalty." "Your future deserves your best years." He stretched his hand toward the village below. "Go and build something that is yours." The elders say, "A person who spends life chasing shadows may miss the sunrise waiting behind them."

When the group finally descended the mountain, they were not the same people who had climbed it. Some immediately changed their ways. Others struggled. Some fell and rose again. For changing the heart is harder than climbing a mountain. Yet none forgot that day.

Years later, many would remember standing atop Mt. Longonot and hearing the priest's words carried by the wind. And whenever they faced difficult choices, they remembered what they had seen from above. The village. The future. The roads. The possibilities. The elders say, "Go up the mountain with a heavy heart. Come down with clear eyes."

And so, children of the fire, whenever you pass beneath the shadow of Mt. Longonot, remember this story. Remember that desire is not always wisdom. Remember that another person's home is not your future. Remember that your tomorrow is precious. And remember that some mountains are climbed not to see the world—but to finally see yourself. That is the story. I have spoken. Think about it.

David Waithera

Author . Poet. Playwright. Ethics Thinker · Storyteller.

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